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A Strange Occurance in Bedford

I must relate some recent events.

In the summer of 2006, I was visiting my in-laws – I had come over to lend a hand with the removal of wallpaper from their living room – and during lunch, I took the opportunity to browse my father-in-law’s modest, yet very interesting, library. His books are arranged by subject, and having an interest in history, I perused those books first.

Amongst books about the American Civil War, World War II, Army Training Manuals and colonial life in New England, I found a thick volume bearing the title, “History of Bedford, NH, 1737-1971.” My father-in-law lived in Bedford (had since the early 1960′s, though he was raised in Manchester, just to the east). At the time, I resided in Hooksett, north of Manchester, though the events I am about to relate caused my relocation in the following years.

I asked if I could borrow the book about Bedford, along with the other volumes relating colonial life (all of which were written in the 1950′s for school children), with the hope that I would learn something of early New England life. The response was, “Yes.”

The school books taught me nothing new and two pages into the History, I knew that I would be disappointed. The book, published in 1971, relied heavily on an earlier history of Bedford, published in 1903, for its beginning chapters. The bulk of the 782 page 1971 history dealt with the 20th century. The 1903 history (which the 1971 book lists at 1,128 pages!) was reduced to about 100 pages in the newer history. Gone were the first-hand accounts of people who remembered the Bedford of the mid-19th century. Gone were the reams of Town Meeting minutes. Gone were the most extensive genealogical tables of any town in New Hampshire. Gone was the detailed information I sought!

Angered, I became determined to find a copy of the 1903 history.

It proved to be an impossible task in the following years.

The Bedford library no longer had any copies available to the public. Their one remaining copy was in such a state of decomposition that no one but professional historians were allowed to view it, and then only sparingly. None of the libraries in the surrounding towns (Manchester, Merrimack, Amherst and Goffstown) had copies. Book retailers (both new and used) as well as internet searches turned up nothing.

I soon gave up my search, read the 1971 history, and then forgot the whole ordeal.

In the fall of 2008, I took the family for a drive up Mount Uncanoonuc to observe the foliage. Uncanoonuc is located in Goffstown, just north of the northwest corner of Bedford and is actually two mountains, both very rounded. In fact, Uncanoonuc is a Pennacook word that means “woman’s breasts.” Many of the place names in Hillsborough County are, or are derived from, Pennacook words. During the early 18th century when Scottish settlers were claiming land in southern New Hampshire, the Pennacooks were the only Native tribe that were friendly with the Europeans – relations have remained good throughout the centuries.

While driving north along Joppa Hill Road, just before crossing into Goffstown (we could see the twin peaks of Uncanoonuc before us), we saw that there was a yard sale going on at one of the old farm-houses. My wife suggested we stop and take a look for any antiques. I agreed and we went.

It was there that I found a decent copy of the 1903 History. It was in a box with a number of other books. The kind old lady who owned the house sold me the lot for five dollars.

It was the most important five dollars I ever spent.

I was unable to investigate the box of books over the next three days (children have an uncanny ability to ruin the best plans of their parents). When I finally had the time, I was astounded at what I had in my possession.

Apart from the 1903 history, there were five leather bound books measuring roughly 8×5 inches and each about one inch thick. The leather was dried and cracked – it was obvious the books were very old. I made sure to wear surgical gloves while handling them (I keep a box with my tools in the garage – they’re very handy at keeping my hands clean while working on my cars or other smaller engines).

It took some time to get used to the thin, spidery hand in which the books were written. They were a journal or diary of a man named David McClary. From what he wrote, it seems he built the house from which I bought the books in 1778. The first book was nothing more than a ledger of sorts he started in February 1779 in order to track the day to day business of his farm with a few unimportant notes about his family and neighbors.

I assumed that the other four books were much the same and decided to turn the lot over to the Bedford Historical Society (BHS).

Over the next two weeks I enjoyed reading of the exploits of the inhabitants of early Bedford via the 1903 history. It satisfactorily fulfilled my need for knowledge. Recounting all I learned from those pages would take too much time, but I will quote one entry from the Bedford Town Meeting Minutes of 1780 as it pertains to my tale:

March 28, 1780: “To see whether the town will allow the constables for the year 1780 any reward for their extraordinary trouble.” $1,780 was given (odd that it is the same number as the year – also a sizable amount for the time!) though there is no mention at all – anywhere – of what the “extraordinary trouble” was.

Satisfied with the history, I turned to McClary’s journals for reading material before surrendering them to the BHS.

As I said before, the first book (which dates from February 20, 1779 to March 2, 1780) was rather dry reading throughout until the last entry.

It reads: “March 2, 1780 – While at the Town Centre today, in order that I might buy seed, I did meet one Peggy Littlefield, a spinster, so she said, also a mulatto. God forgive me for what I did! A spell she laid, an she must, for next I knew, I was in Riddle’s barn, with no knowledge of getting there, and laying there with her in a carnal way. Lord, forgive this poor soul and Damn Peggy Littlefield and her infant, Hager, as she called him, who did watch us from the shadows.”

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The Linden Tree – Session I

This is the first installment of my serialized book, “The Linden Tree.” Future episodes promise to be longer and more exciting. Enjoy!

Lightning struck the ancient linden tree five days ago. The scar was still smoldering when I left the village yesterday, even though Elder Jared had tried his best to heal the wound. He said that the tree is dying and that if it passes, it will mean the end of our village. The elder has said that the tree has lost it’s glow, that we are doomed and must atone before the end. He was still sitting before the tree, head bowed in prayer, alone.

The villagers are a hardy group, but they are frightened. Rumors have spread among them of the coming Southern Darkness. A child’s tale, but one that has taken root with them. I pleaded with the elder to lead the people, to succor their fears, but he has given in to defeat.

It has fallen to me to find the answers to the signs.

The shepherd’s son saw one when the linden was struck. He was driving the herd in early because the wind had shifted from the west to the south. He knew a storm was coming. He tells the tale that the bolt was shaped like a sword, that it drove straight to the heart of the tree. No one else saw this, but he is a trustworthy lad and no one questioned him.

We have tales of the Nature spirits making themselves known in this manner. Sword shaped lightning, shield-walls of water forming in the eastern lands, fiery hands reaching down from mountain tops – in such ways the spirits make there presence felt.

Many believe we have somehow angered the spirits. That the lightning sword was sent to punish us for growing away from the old ways. They say that we must begin the sacrifices again.

I disagree. I too, have seen signs that need answers.

The wound in the linden revealed a rot in the tree’s core. The tree had been dying already before the spirits sent their sword. The heart of the tree was black and stank of death. Elder Jared took this to mean our doom. He said that the tree had abandoned us long ago and that the Sky Spirit was just finishing the job.

Again, I disagree.

The wound in the tree revealed something more. Something no one else saw but me and it is why I left the village yesterday.

Deep within the wound, buried in foul rot, I saw a glint of blue. Reaching in, I pulled out a stone of clear blue the size of the nail on my small finger. It was warm and I could feel it pulse like a heart. This, I knew, was the heart of the tree and it still lived for it spoke to me. Not in words but it showed me a vision of a linden tree so big, so alive and so ancient I knew that I was seeing a Nature Spirit in its true form.

And so, I left the village yesterday. I told no one about the stone or what it showed me, only that I was seeking help from some of the larger settlements further north.

I mean to find the Tree Spirit and get answers. I believe it can help.

And if the rumors of the Southern Darkness are true, I may not have much time.

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Fiction Friday, March 2, 2012

For today’s Fiction Friday, I’m not posting any original work.

Instead, I’d like to talk about a very important part of your fiction writing – Setting.

Setting – where your story takes place – can make or break your story. Where the characters are, how they interact with their environment (or if you write fantasy, how the environment interacts with the characters) and consequences of their actions – all can make a compelling story and, if you’re detailed enough, can immerse your readers into a believable world that will keep them turning pages.

I was discussing with my wife the other day about the various incarnations of the Star Trek shows and told her that my favorite show was Deep Space Nine. Here’s a brief synopsis of the series, lifted from Wikipedia:

The show begins after the brutal occupation of the planet Bajor. With the Cardassians gone, the Bajoran people ask the United Federation of Planets to help run a Cardassian built space station, Deep Space Nine, outside of Bajor. After the Federation takes control of the station, the protagonists of the show discover a uniquely stable wormhole that provides immediate access to the distant Gamma Quadrant making Bajor and the station one of the most strategically important locations in the galaxy. The show chronicles the events of the station’s crew, led by Commander (later Captain) Benjamin Sisko, played by Avery Brooks, and Major (later Colonel) Kira Nerys, played by Nana Visitor. Recurring plot elements include the repercussions of the lengthy and brutal Cardassian occupation of Bajor, Sisko’s spiritual role for the Bajorans as the Emissary of the Prophets, and in later seasons a war with the Dominion.

What makes DS9 really stand out from the other Star Trek series is its setting. It is the only show whose setting is a stationary space station while all the others center on a ship as it travels about the galaxy. What this allowed the writers of DS9 to do, was that they were able to have multi-episode story arcs – some spanning an entire season – and they were able to explore in much more depth the regular characters as they interacted with each other, the one nearby planet (Bajor) and the immediate threat (Cardassians).

Granted, this is scary, but it's the wrong Kardashian.

Garak, a Cardassian's Cardassian. Member of the Obsidian Order, or just "a simple tailor?"

This unique setting of a space station let DS9 stand out among the other Star Trek shows. The writers could now explore themes that until this point (the Original Series and Next Generation were the only shows previous to DS9 – I don’t count the animated series) Star Trek had avoided – such as conflict within the crew and religion.

That’s what makes DS9 my favorite Trek show. The setting allowed so much more character exploration and that’s what I like in TV and books. Setting can give you so many opportunities to explore characters – how they grow and the relationships they have – and that’s what drives a good story. Compelling characters.

For instance, in DS9, there is a bar/casino called Quark’s. It’s run by a Ferengi by the name of Quark and his brother, Rom. Ferengi had made a few appearances on Next Generation, so the race and a bit about their culture had been introduced into the Star Trek universe.

Keep your Federation away from my Dabo tables.

Ferengi are very business driven, ruled by making more money. In TNG, they were mostly portrayed as comedic buffoons, but in DS9, we get to see so much more of them. Their capitalistic nature is explored as well as their sexist culture (female Ferengi are no more than slaves). Quark becomes a central character – much more than just a bartender. He plays informant to Commander Sisko and fall guy when his mother marries the Grand Nagus (the ruler of the Ferengi) and she leads a women’s revolt against the Ferengi sexist norm.

Grand Nagus Zek - a face not even Mom can love.

The Ferengi also play a part in dual coming-of-age stories as the series unfolds. Jake Sisko, the Commander’s son, and Nog, Rom’s son, become good friends and we get to watch them both grow from children to young adults as they both try to deal with stereotypes and racism (as much as Star Trek was willing to go into). It was a great way for the writers to drive home the point of how these various species, all gathered together in one place, will face those types of difficulties. Eventually, Nog enlists in Starfleet – the first Ferengi to ever do so.

So many other themes are explored in DS9 that none of the other Trek shows touched because of the setting of a mobile ship.

  • RELIGION – Commander Sisko is chosen by the Bajoran Prophets to be their savior. Sisko has a big problem with this (at first), but the writers delved into what religion means, how it works and what effects it can have on people.
  • WAR – The on-going struggle of the Bajoran people against the Cardassians is played out and we get to see the long-term effects of war in a variety of ways – economically, mentally, politically, etc
  • FAMILY – There are so many family driven stories in DS9 – the Worf’s family’s redemption by the Klingon High Council, the shape-shifter Odo’s discovery of who he is and his desire to join his people, and even the bizarre family of the Trill people as told through Jadzia Dax’s history.
  • POLITICS – How the Federation presence affects Bajor and it’s people, the Cardassian reactions to it and the eventual introduction of the Dominion – all contribute ways for the writers to explore the various aspects of politics.

I hope you can see how setting can effect your story and that choosing the proper one for your story can open up worlds of possibilties in your writing.

Weekly Recap 2012 #8

The eighth week of 2012 had a few milestones.

Music Monday was my 41st birthday and my 50th post at I Can’t Brain. I celebrated by stopping to enjoy the beauty we can see all around us with a moving story about violinist Joshua Bell.

On Thursday, I shared a few things I’ve heard here and there. All true, actual conversations. I also had a new article publish at Borderless News and Views. It’s called “Hot for Teacher.” You should go check it out.

For Fiction Friday, I sent out a request for help as to where you might think my story should be headed. I received two responses.

And Saturday, I Can’t Brain got an interactive facelift. Check out the Home Page to see how it looks and works.

That’s it! I’ve got a few cool things lined up for the coming week, so stay tuned!

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Fiction Friday – February 24, 2012

Today’s Fiction Friday doesn’t have it’s own page. I had an idea the other day, wrote it down, liked it – but now I don’t know what to do with it. I need your help.

Please, leave a comment as to where you think the story could go from where I stopped. I don’t usually draw blanks like this, so I’m looking for some direction. Anything will help.

Here we go:

Lightning struck the ancient linden tree yesterday. The scar still smolders, though Eldar Jared tried his best to heal the wound. The people of the village have gone about their usual tasks today, though I can see the fear hidden in the depths of their eyes. That ancient tree, rent asunder during last night’s storm, had stood in the center of the village since it’s founding during my grandfather’s grandfather’s time. It was a totem of good, the protector of the village, the reason we had not yet succumbed to the Southern Darkness.

I can see the fear in their eyes.

The villagers are a hardy group: what else can they do but go about their day? To them it would do no good to hide cowering in root cellars until the Darkness comes. Better to work and await the inevitable that way.

Elder Jared has said the linden has lost it’s glow, that we are doomed and must atone before the end. He sits before the tree now, head bowed in prayer, alone. He could not heal the tree.

A storm approaches from the south. At this time of year, storms come from the west. It is the Darkness, coming to claim the last bastion of an ancient time when the glory of the Fae ruled this land. It comes for the tree.

Dark clouds pour overhead and the rumble of thunder rolls across the surrounding forest. The Southern Darkness comes and we are lost to the silent flash of lightning.

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Weekly Recap 2012 #7

Only three posts this last week, so let’s jump right to it!

On Music Monday, I introduced one of my favorite guitarists, Antoine Dufour. Chock full of videos, that post was a multi-media experience!

Wednesday I got a bit whiny about not having time to write all I want to write.

I posted a short piece for Fiction Friday.

That’s all for I Can’t Brain, but it’s not all I did this past week. On Thursday, my debut article for Borderless News and Views was published. Called Normalizing Mormon or Marketing Mitt?, I explore the possibility that the recent Mormon Church ad campaign was started to help Mitt Romney’s presidential campaign.

Tune in to BNV every Thursday at 9AM EST for a new article by yours truly.

Tomorrow is a big day. Music Monday will be my 50th post for I Can’t Brain!! It’ll be a special day.

Oh, it’s also my birthday, so I guess there’s that, too.